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Mommy (In Law) Dearest

Contributed by poetic_influence on Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 04:15:58 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I can't stand you
Your words are like pure acid to my ears
Leave me alone I command you
If you would look into my eyes
You'd see a sign that says "breakdown is much closer than it appears
Your driving me straigt to insanity
When will you shut up
Accusations and lack of communication forcing me to live unhappily
People break your whole lifestyle and you get mad at me over a broken cup
Living with you is like a chore never to be finished
And deep down inside all of my emotions have been deminished
Oh sweet mother in law
I can't wait til the day when I can break your jaw
All you to is treat me inferior
But yet people who use you are treated superior
Thats not just wrong but thats evil
And way past the point of unbelievable
You treat your own son like he way The Omen himself
And then you play favorites I mean what the hell
You had beaten your daughtr til her body was to weak to cry
And then when your asked of it the first thing you do is lie
You talk behind peoples backs and then when confronted you deny
I may have to have you around while I''m loving your son
But Lord I promise you that this war has just begun
But win it you will not
Because you will die before me...or have you forgot
I may be a lot of things but a loser I'am not
And just remember ...In hell....Its always hot
Will an everlasting smell of flesh as it rots
Mommy in lawy dearest..Oh how I hate you a lot








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Re: Mommy (In Law) Dearest (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobsKK on Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 11:03:54 PM AEST
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Wow thats kind of sad...Its a good poem but it makes KK sad lol.


Re: Mommy (In Law) Dearest (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 06:13:18 PM AEST
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Bliddy hell,, ur REALLY angry aint ya ! :-)


Re: Mommy (In Law) Dearest (User Rating: 1 )
by Kamal on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 02:10:02 PM AEST
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Man shoot that *****.....


Re: Mommy (In Law) Dearest (User Rating: 1 )
by Kamal on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 02:10:03 PM AEST
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Man shoot that *****.....


Re: Mommy (In Law) Dearest (User Rating: 1 )
by loura on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 02:46:13 PM AEST
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wow....this is really good...i mean, the feelings...i have no idea of how it feels to be in a similar situation, but the poem transmits so much anger an hate!!!...and the rhymes make it so much stronger...it's GREAT!!!


Re: Mommy (In Law) Dearest (User Rating: 1 )
by jdawg on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 08:18:21 AM AEST
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one word.. daaaamn.. i have no idea what your going through.. but your poem makes it feel like im in your shoes.. but.. damn..lol.. a truly great write.. keep up the great work. and just remember.. if she's that horrible? karma comes back around.. so she will get what's coming to her someday.. best of wishes to you and god bless.
~Justin L.~




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