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Fool's Eulogy
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 04:56:47 AM in AEST
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On freshly painted lips, still a lingering taste
of a positive spin, on a monotonous waste
This alter ego of a silver lining
provokes a second-hand script, that needs refining
A red-faced shamble of a one-sided affair
ignite twelve percent truths, with nothing to compare
Of course it's forgotten, why wouldn't it be?
Why stand and fight, when you can turn tail, and flee?
Suffer the wrath of an unrealized expectation
guilty of a victimized interpretation
On one hand, a promising memory
the flip side, a gluttonous mockery
Never designed to be remembered, or even to haunt
Not meant to experience love, merely to have it taunt
An endless stream of pride-bashing remorse
reality floods in with cataclysmic force
Swept up, something not easy to replace
dashed hopes, that were so callously erased
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Re: Fool's Eulogy
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by guiltycircles on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 05:49:16 AM AEST
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| that is awesome, the words sink through slowly and powerfully, |
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Re: Fool's Eulogy
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by Shmokin on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 05:56:54 AM AEST
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lovely piece, v powerful,
This alter ego of a silver lining
provokes a second-hand script, that needs refining
nice line :-) |
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Re: Fool's Eulogy
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 08:32:56 AM AEST
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(((((((((((((((((((( Scorpenatoreriffic ))))))))))))))))))))
You know I speak the truth with I say I can feel your pain.
*relates all too well to the abuse of a liar*
Such pain and emotion consistently expressed in the beautiful fashion of the Scorpenator!!!!
You always have such beautiful flow no matter what you're writing about.
We can't all be jerks. You will experience love. Don't give up, PerfectoScorp!!! You're too good for that...too strong.
The DetectoScorp will weed out the losers and will find that one treasure waiting for you at the other end of the rainbow.
A brilliant Scorpendous write! As always never disappointing.
Take care,
TIMbo
:-)
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Re: Fool's Eulogy
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by sararose1950 on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 01:09:36 PM AEST
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this is wonderfully worded - the last line......."dashed hopes, that were so callously erased"... it soooo says it all. Excellent poem!!!
Peace and Light |
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Re: Fool's Eulogy
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by slogan on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 02:40:51 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem.. I like this one a lot.. great job..jh |
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Re: Fool's Eulogy
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 04:01:00 PM AEST
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Oh my dearest Scorp, Chin up sweet girl.
I know you've been hurt one too many times my dear friend, but they're not all like that as "TIM" says. You shall find a true loving man who shall sweep you off ur feet and give you all the love and respect that u deserve Scorp. You deserve the best that life has to offer. You are a wonderful and special young lady. May love reign in your heart once again real soon.
A very well expressed and penned down piece of poetry. You never disappoint ur reader Scorp. You always produce outstanding writes to keep ur reader captivated from start to finish. Although I wished it was a happier subject.
Much love n hugs to u my dear friend. Chin up I'm always here for u.
~sue from across the blue~ |
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Re: Fool's Eulogy
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by Mangos on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 04:16:00 PM AEST
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Hey scorp, sorry to hear your feelin down, this was a great way of expressing it, I really like this poem for its format, the words just all fit.
Nice job as always
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Re: Fool's Eulogy
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 06:26:04 PM AEST
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Hmm really good poem I liked how it flowed
and how beautifully poetic it was. The ending
was brilliant as well although really sad. I
hope things become "happy" again for you.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Fool's Eulogy
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:30:44 PM AEST
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Very powerful!
And I must say, I am quite impressed with the content here, emotion aside,...(well, as if that can happen!) This has a flair to it, Gosh! I think I have just witnessed another growth spurt on your part scorpy....very impressive!!! |
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Re: Fool's Eulogy
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by LostAmbition on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 12:31:53 PM AEST
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Never designed to be remembered, or even to haunt
Not meant to experience love, merely to have it taunt
u cant be speakin of yer self!
Im sure uv haunted more then
uv been haunted by!
I havent read up on u for a time
so i need to catch up
but is this the same guy?
I dont mean to be rude but y do u care?
Id love to get to no u better but u always
ignore my pms! Im not a psyco or anything
just u seem like a cool person thats all
i might post a poem in a couple days!
take good care scorp
i dont think youre a fool.
i think he is
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Re: Fool's Eulogy
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by Jen54 on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 02:12:01 PM AEST
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this poem touched me. I felt the pain and emotions in it. One day you will find the one that makes the world fade away you can't rush it. Much love.
Jen |
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Re: Fool's Eulogy
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by emystar on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 06:46:04 PM AEST
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Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Fool's Eulogy
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by Alibi on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 10:50:19 AM AEST
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| You seem to be in alot of emotional anguish lately Scorp. I sure do hope things get brighter for you in the new year. This is dreadfully sad, especially the ending. I enjoyed the way you wrote this either way. Take Care my dear. |
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Re: Fool's Eulogy
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by wizard on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 12:30:57 AM AEST
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great write scorp,
nice rhyming and flow...i particularly liked the format.
i am always inspired when i read your work.
wiz |
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Re: Fool's Eulogy
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 05:22:03 AM AEST
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| Well done a powerful write |
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Re: Fool's Eulogy
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th December 2014 @ 04:50:36 PM AEST
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i absolutely love your title, being this one is from
like a decade ago, and i'm pretty sure things are a lot
better and happier for you these days, saying that- ~this
poem reminds me of some i wrote about dufas' in
general, it is perfected in style, flow and the hearts many
trials which only one who has gone through this one
sided love can truly appreciate, beautifully penned!
hugs n' love nessa |
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