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Some Beach In Charlotte
Contributed by
outlaw_mutiny
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Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 11:49:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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just last year i found a beach on a sleeping charlotte street
she was the kind of girl with waves of warmth that could knock you off your feet
she had a smile that was like the sun on the coast
but it was her cold heart i remember the most
she knew she was mean but didn't realy care
as beautiful as she was i was too afraid to stare
first the sky above her was beautiful now it's no longer starlit
and no body believes that i drowned in some beach in charlotte
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Re: Some Beach In Charlotte
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 12:30:34 AM AEST
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Hey posted the poem but now I see I did your name incorrect so I'll chage it.
An awesome write as all your writes.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Some Beach In Charlotte
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by Xnoybis on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 04:29:51 AM AEST
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| haha, nice. I love it. That's all of them, donchaknow? |
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