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Sleepless
Contributed by
Kellros
on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 09:07:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Silence comforts a homeless soul,
fires turn to ash from dark ember-coal,
pain writhes in a heart diseased,
scars written lines of past,
future symbols make no sense,
dying waiting on suspense.
Weakness folds blankets warming cold hands,
tearing, thrusting a dagger through an empty glass,
vague like a heart aflame, burn in flames,
but no one understands.
Help is only a measure, like a cup of water,
in which you drown, loss of breath
a loss of life, today is a day and
tomorrow is just a dream.
But clouds prance by, gliding the skies,
shadows dance the ground and sun shines at last,
earth is warmed as hope arrives,
a total rebirth of life, without pain,
a once rotten dead tree,
grown leaves, grown green, grown free...
what is time if no one understands?
Copyright ©
Kellros
... [
2005-12-10 21:07:52]
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Re: Sleepless
(User Rating: 1 )
by Buggsy on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 10:07:25 AM AEST
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| Once again I like this poem as I did "Scars", and once again it flows well. |
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Re: Sleepless
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 09:26:43 PM AEST
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| Very interesting, a nice write. |
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Re: Sleepless
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by crow6279 on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 06:23:50 PM AEST
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| Excellent...nothing more to add. |
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