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An Infidelity
Contributed by
MrMojoRisin
on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 12:24:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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One passionate night
Her perfect love ripped apart
No one's fault but mine
Copyright ©
MrMojoRisin
... [
2005-12-10 12:24:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: An Infidelity
(User Rating: 1 ) by lost_chadow on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 01:36:29 PM AEST (User
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(your poem's short, so's my comment.)
ouch |
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Re: An Infidelity
(User Rating: 1 ) by STECKS on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 10:59:20 AM AEST (User
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This was a good haiku. It has alot of Feeling to it. Keep up the good writing. |
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Re: An Infidelity
(User Rating: 1 ) by hello0987 on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 05:37:49 PM AEST (User
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Why don't you leave her alone and go jump off a cliff? |
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