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GREATNESS
Contributed by
stecks
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Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 09:03:34 AM in AEST
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oops
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Greatness is in the eye of the beholder,
with a arm a gun a soldier,
Cant hold ya,
left speechless,
with mouth wide open,
spirit stolen,
parents eyes swollen,
tears flow down,
ears all around,
media spreading the news,
for another soldier we lose,
left our hearts in bruise,
Its time for the enemy to get there dues,
Ready to cock back and shoot,
But cant,
cause its a fluke,
a nuke,
Cuz everyone just got duke.
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stecks
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2005-12-10 09:03:34]
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Re: GREATNESS
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by Shmokin on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 04:17:11 PM AEST
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| was goin really well,, last two lines didnt do it for me,, potential there tho :-) |
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Re: GREATNESS
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by randumbchit on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 09:58:29 AM AEST
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| great write you have great potential |
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