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Sea
Contributed by
bronc12
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Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 09:01:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I was all alone,
My heart turned to stone.
No one knew my pain,
I stood alone, in the rain.
All I felt was grief.
I was a colorless leaf.
All I could do was cry.
My life was a starless sky.
I felt I had no worth,
I was being stepped upon, like earth.
Then I found someone,
Who brought me back into the sun.
They were there for me,
They became my tree.
I am no longer salty, or sour.
I am a blossoming flower.
Though I lose tear after tear,
It is time for me to face a new frontier.
Life has no guarantee,
It is the waters of the sea.
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bronc12
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2005-12-10 09:01:32]
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Re: Sea
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 09:21:42 AM AEST
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| Nice write |
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Re: Sea
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by mrpwase on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 04:04:30 PM AEST
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Didn't like the rhyming - sounded forced at times.
Nice imagery though. |
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