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Hidden deep within
Contributed by
radstraightedge
on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 11:01:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Close your eyes and say a prayer that the words you have inside no one will ever hear. The thoughts you have, you've managed to hide, but now you see there's no one standing by your side. Somedays it's nice, you're glad that no one's there, but everyone has days that they have something to share. A life alone is like nothing you'll ever know. And the days drag on as if being beaten with stones. It would be so nice to see a helping hand. But instead you seem to be sinking into rather quick sand. At times it feels as if you have the plague because no one seems to shoot even a simple glance your way. I guess to deal with this is what you'll have to do. And the words that seem so right will never be true.
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Re: Hidden deep within
(User Rating: 1 ) by seci on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 12:33:48 PM AEST (User
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thi poem is quite different, but i like it because it is different. i like the way you use your words in this poem. i will continue to read your poems as long as you keep writing. |
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