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Abandoned
Contributed by
Thoren
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Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 09:32:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Abandoned man.
Standing bravely in the shadow of his emptiness.
Searching the vast echo of desert
Following the tear filled tracks,
left by his heart.
Copyright ©
Thoren
... [
2005-12-09 21:32:32]
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Re: Abandoned
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by DesolantDreamer on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 10:00:55 PM AEST
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beautiful. Simple and sweet. Wonderfully expressiveness etched deep within the verse. *oooh! thats a good one! 'scribbles down on paper'* I hope all is well at the end of the journey!
~*~They all stare; but they'll never see it's something inside me~*~ Tsubaki |
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Re: Abandoned
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 09:46:49 AM AEST
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| Nice poem =) |
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Re: Abandoned
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 04:06:07 PM AEST
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So sad.... But hope remains. "Standing bravely in the shadow of his emptiness."
Keep writing! |
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