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Madness Prevails

Contributed by punkhead13 on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 08:02:08 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics




One Two fredy's comeing for you

Three Four better lock your door

Five Six go grab your crusifix

seven eight gotta stay up late

nine ten never sleep again

Freddy, the man without a mask

he makes the sand man seem like an ask

any one to stop this man

this story ends where it began

born on Elm street

died of fire

stuck in your nightmares

his only desire

forced from the crypt

from the only threshold in your mind

where the darkness never ends

he is shortly confind



slipping under

to the unconsciouse relm

no need for sadation

welcome to Elm

Welcom to elm

where the children sleep

welcome to Elm

where insanity reaps



The darnk side of the rainbow

where the rain fills the streets

is any of this real?

or is it fantisy?

scream all you want

no one will hear

you can run you can hide

but not from your fear

holy water and prayer

will onlyhelp you fail

burn him to the ground

don't let him prevail

slipping under

to the unconsciouse realm

no need for sadation

welcome to elm

welcome to elm

where the children sleep

welcome to elm

where insanity reaps





Copyright © punkhead13 ... [ 2005-12-09 20:02:08]
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Re: Madness Prevails (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 08:25:29 PM AEST
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I hope I'm the one dreaming and someone really did not just write a poem about Nightmare on Elm Street.

Brandin


Re: Madness Prevails (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 08:34:30 PM AEST
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nice poem


Re: Madness Prevails (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 09:52:56 PM AEST
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this isnt dark. the line breaks are too distracting and make this song seem less together. this obviously didnt have a lot of work put into it typing wise, because of the number of errors, and that is disappointing to a reader when they read something not even worked on hardly enough. i think you have some great rhythm working through this, but some of this is too redundant, and should use the repeat signs instead of drawing out the lyrics. some of your rhymes are too forced and most songs do not use the stereotypical lyrics (rhyme, rhythm, and repetition) to this extent, because it limits originality. there needs to be some moderation of those things for it to look good on paper, but it is a song so looking good on paper isnt exactly the point. but its all thats there at the moment.




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