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Life's Ticking
Contributed by
Stalkee
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Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 09:20:00 AM in AEST
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"He's such a quiet boy and he is such a freak"
Thats what everybody around the school thought of me
But who would be the one to break the news to mom and dad
In the way that I had decided to die
"What's that he does? Tell me that again?"
Throughout the school the word had spread
That I had such an obsession with slicing myself
And now I have been verbally abused
Well I'll never forget what someone had said to me
No I won't forget what they had said to me
Life's a ticking and it's ticking
Like a clock until the end
But when will the end come for you?
No one seems to care if I live or die
They are all pushing me over the edge
Do you want to see me live?
Do you want to see me die?
Well I'm in this little tiny corner against the wall
Have the razor in my hands ready to end this life
People now are screaming for my sanity to save my life
Too late now, I have only a few breaths left...
Well I'll never forget what someone had said to me
No I won't forget what they had said to me
Life's a ticking and it's ticking
Like a clock until the end
Now it's finally come for me
It's all their faults they couldn't stand me
They couldn't push aside the differences and make peace
They had to go act all big and start verbally abusing me
Well it's all because of them now I hope they understand
"He was a quiet boy, but now he's dead"
That's what they say about me all the time
"Where do you suppose he is right now?"
"Singing with the angels or crying with the fallen?"
Well I'll never forget what someone had said to me
No I won't forget what they had said to me
Life's a ticking and it's ticking
Like a clock until the end
Now it's finally come for me
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Stalkee
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2003-01-24 09:20:00]
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Re: Life's Ticking
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by OreO on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 09:29:51 AM AEST
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There seems to have a bit of a lyrical sense to this one....i think you could write some good song lyrics....this is so sad and deep and tugs pretty hard at the heart...i hope this isn't really how your feeling...i enjoy reading your poetry...i hope all is well with you my friend....sad but beautiful write....
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Re: Life's Ticking
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by Stalkee on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 04:44:36 PM AEST
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| hey, thanks for the post! as for the lyrics thing: i'd like to write lyrics but i'd need someone who can write music =) this is how i feel sometimes....i was writin this when i had a pretty crap day at school and all this stuff happenend, but oh well....anyways thanks so much for the reply!!!! |
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Re: Life's Ticking
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by audreyann on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 08:29:28 PM AEST
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Thats really deep and sad. but i liked it
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