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Last Word . . .
Contributed by
JenJen
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Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 05:44:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I have done too much wrong
Too much pain has been caused
It is time to give up
And throw it all away
As I sit here in the corner
Wishing things were different
All i can think of is how i have let you down
So many times I have wanted to do this
But never got a chance
Maybe it will finally be over
Peace will come at last
So as i have to say my last words now
I love you so much and Goodbye . . .
Copyright ©
JenJen
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2005-12-09 17:44:34]
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Re: Last Word . . .
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by Lin54 on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 06:14:31 PM AEST
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Your words are of regret and being trapped without any possible way out except death. I've wondered about that myself when things never seem to go right--but there is no peace except running to the One who created us and crawling in His lap and just cry it out!
I can feel your despair!
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Re: Last Word . . .
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 06:44:38 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: Last Word . . .
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by DesolantDreamer on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 06:45:05 PM AEST
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| A beautiful and heartwrenching poem. Very emotional. My blessings with you. Just remeber that the lotus flower blooms in the mud. |
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Re: Last Word . . .
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 10:29:34 PM AEST
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| well as for writing a happy poem. i have the same problem and ive come to face that if you write of an inauthentic feeling it will only express itself in a poem....and thats trash. and as for the poem, not a strange emotion. not a very novel poem either. this is a very typical poem for this category, and i think even if your hand wont let you write happiness you can let your true talent come through in your poem. |
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Re: Last Word . . .
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by flamingblade on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 04:26:58 PM AEST
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| well unlike some people, i like this poem alot. i feel the same way all the time. |
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Re: Last Word . . .
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by SocialMisfit on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 04:46:49 AM AEST
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self pity is of no use to you, tho i myself am a big fan of wallowing in it, try to get back up and go for round two.
as for the poem, its short, sweet and to the point, loved it.
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Re: Last Word . . .
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by kittie30 on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 11:23:42 AM AEST
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| very well written, keep up writing ur work is great and it helps with emotions |
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