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those left behind
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 04:13:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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a sea of people
dressed in black
flowers for those
who can't come back
the heavens open
down comes the rain
trying to wash away
the mourners pain
don't pity the one
who has died
it's much worse for
those left behind
for although
their loved one's at peace
the pain in their hearts
will never cease
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2005-12-09 16:13:00]
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Re: those left behind
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by DesolantDreamer on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 04:18:32 PM AEST
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that brought tears to my eyes. The pain of loosing one will never cease. It is true. But relesh their memory, for you will visit them one day, and they would not want you to have lived your life in pain. Very wonderful and emotional write. my blessings are with you and those who are mourning the death of a close person.
~*~The lotus flower blooms in the mud~*~ |
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Re: those left behind
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by Shmokin on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 06:37:25 PM AEST
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| lovely elegant poem :-) |
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Re: those left behind
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by marie on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 09:08:31 PM AEST
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| wonderful poem. true, true. |
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