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Life's Icy Sigh
Contributed by
thumper
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Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 03:54:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Winter's white hush
Falls hither and yon
Blanketing all
In a great snowy yawn
Christmas lights twinkle
Colored auras peek out
Looking all hazy
In winter's night shroud
Soft puffy cool
Wind drifted high
For a moment all pause
In life's icy sigh
The magical air
That hangs all around
When chrystallized flakes
Flutter softly to ground
They muffle and stifle
All sounds to be heard
Making all bright
In a snow covered world
And so for awhile
All is pristeen
Blindingly white
Amazingly clean
There's nothing more peaceful
Than a silent snow fall
To make one content
When winter does call
Author's note: Love the snow, hate the cold! Peace.
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thumper
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Re: Life's Icy Sigh
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by shelby on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 04:50:33 PM AEST
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left me with a serene peaceful feeling. This reminded me of the snowflakes looking like feathers falling lightly down and everything was so quiet and still.
Michelle |
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by trini on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 07:30:49 PM AEST
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this was great, it sets a beautiful scene. i never get to experiance this because i live on a busy road, i step out on my front porch to find grid lock. thanks for the picture. keep up the good work
-trini |
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Re: Life's Icy Sigh
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 08:51:48 PM AEST
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Absolutely superb! The imagery u cast onto ur reader is breath taking and beautiful. An excellent and well penned piece of poetry well worth the read. Thanks so much for sharing ur work with us.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Life's Icy Sigh
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by marie on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 09:10:39 PM AEST
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| omg i love snow! merry christmas! |
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Re: Life's Icy Sigh
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 09:59:14 PM AEST
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Yeah, me 2
I luv the beach but don't go out for in the water.
Past my waste-n- I freak.
Now not to even mention the weather these days.
Very good write, my friend.
hugg-n-big ole smiles,
emy
U asked where i GET MY PURKY, u don't wonna hear it! Mainly I think it comes from watching the news. Also I've lost some close friends, family members etc. If I turn God loose in these fingers thee **** flies.
See we can sit-n-worry or give it 2 him and take on the talents-n-run with um.
Great snow scene here-n-thanks so now I want have 2 get in the snow anytime soon, I hope. |
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Re: Life's Icy Sigh
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 05:33:14 PM AEST
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A awesome beautiful poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Life's Icy Sigh
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by Spike on
Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 08:44:23 AM AEST
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I loved how you captured that whole feeling of a northern winter, but especially the magic of that light snow fall to silence the world and still its restless beating. Just gorgeous.
Have a magical Cristmas,
Spike |
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Re: Life's Icy Sigh
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by Hurretje on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 04:05:57 AM AEST
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Lovely, icy, snowy... It sparkles like ice crystals... A joy to read.
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: Life's Icy Sigh
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by linagalMBfan01 on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 02:53:14 PM AEST
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grandma i love this it was so nice i love the snow too but the cold is not fun
i love you |
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Re: Life's Icy Sigh
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by Sparkz16 on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 06:40:37 PM AEST
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| i hate snow but love this its great you write great and beautiful things grandma |
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Re: Life's Icy Sigh
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 09:12:43 AM AEST
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so beautiful and peaceful, i love snow more than any other weather, and cannot wait to be snowed in again, especially as im now in sweltering heat! ~just goes to show your poetry is timeless!
love n' hugs nessa |
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