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The Killing Silence
Contributed by
darkscorpio
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Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 02:20:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Didn’t you know that I mean what I say
Hurt me too much, and I’ll just go away
and chill you from the silence….
Louder than the lies you’ve told
With piercing eyes, and freezing cold
A silent form of violence, to kill you with the silence
I tried to stop you, but you didn’t see
The damage you were causing me
An emotional violence, you feel the killing silence
Copyright ©
darkscorpio
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2005-12-09 14:20:18]
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Re: The Killing Silence
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 01:35:37 AM AEST
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A short but pretty good write I liked the
rhyming and the rhymes in the line (violence,
silence). Very emotional... I'm too tired to say
anything else.
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Re: The Killing Silence
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 09:53:02 AM AEST
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| Nice write =) |
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Re: The Killing Silence
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by jdawg on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 07:50:15 AM AEST
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great write.. keep up the good work. best of wishes.
~Justin L.~ |
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