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FEELS JUST LIKE CHRISTMAS

Contributed by emystar on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 06:30:33 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Got woke up with a
smile by youngest girl.
Dee, myself -n-grandson, dill pickle.
We had chinese lunch.
Oh man did we munch.!

Feels just like Christmas.
later in this beautifull day
made me feel jus dandy.
My son brought my Windows xp.
got me fixed just fine 4 me..

Luv jus flowing like a mountain stream
caressing all my senses
then Tarzan broke my fences.
Only one thing could make
a blesseded (triple x day)xxx day.

Jus sweep me off my feet
snuggle me fore I sleep.
Soon we'll touch our dreams
so deep in-luv it seems.

Now luv endured thru pain.
Never thought I'd play again.
Now life is great dear.
A beautifull fate, I hear.

Note: triple x day is a day when nuthing but luv can exist. usually can hear the xxx day bird sing even in the middle of the nite.
My hippy taught me that.

by
Emy Star

Copyright © Emy Star
yeah Iknow the rythm is of but witll fix when I get a chance this is second edit.

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Copyright Â© emystar ... [ 2005-12-09 06:30:33]
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Re: FEELS JUST LIKE CHRISTMAS (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 06:39:43 AM AEST
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lovely feel to the poem, enjoyed it,

one comment,, perhaps u cld put 'triple x' instead of 'xxx' i found it a mite confusin, but tht might be just me :-)

Re: FEELS JUST LIKE CHRISTMAS (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 07:00:56 AM AEST
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Oh Emstar, you're a star shining above so bright in a league of ur own. I love ur work, ur style of writing. You can always pen down awesome writes time and time again. Hats off to u sweet lady.
Loves ya,
~sue~

Re: FEELS JUST LIKE CHRISTMAS (User Rating: 1 )
by STECKS on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 09:37:16 AM AEST
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Very Nicely Written. You can definitly feel the emotion in the poem. Keep up the great writing.

Re: FEELS JUST LIKE CHRISTMAS (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 03:00:18 PM AEST
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This poem brought a smile to my face. Leaves me with a warm and fuzzy feeling. lol I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for the happy, happy feeling. ; o) I liked this alot. Kudos to you emy! Peace
Thumps ;o)

Re: FEELS JUST LIKE CHRISTMAS (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 03:06:28 PM AEST
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another winner emy your quite the writter . . .

((((emy))))

Ben

Re: FEELS JUST LIKE CHRISTMAS (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 01:36:02 AM AEST
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Emy your star shines so bright

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