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a story without an and
Contributed by
boobiepeach
on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 07:30:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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a case in point where cupid missed of for shame a iron fist will throw
to me this fable has no end and is rapped in a wash of image
a tale where averythings not real and townies always pillage
a story we start not and end the same as only we can tell
for princeses and toads are put apon and the moral never figure
the guns are loaded and damsel in stress but pull not the triger
a tale of strength we never know but memorize to clear
the hero on his mustel steed the witch has got her mirror
dont worry you say with doubt in place, the brave have all the fear
a fantasy i should not indure cause trouble bathes its thought
greek god is looking for his match with a lighting bult to myth
a greeneyed monster cries as he pulls up to end as fifth
a courage sought in you has to fade
a knight your not and with not blade
a end of failure will not tail
you and i will always be
a treasure box without a key
our blind shows not to see
Copyright ©
boobiepeach
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2005-12-08 19:30:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: a story without an and
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 05:18:28 PM AEST (User
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Wow, Peach, you outdid yourself on this one. Catchy, exciting with anticipation, waiting to see........the end you said would not be there.
A treasure box without a key.......fantastic way of saying it, clever and unique......
I enjoyed every minute of it!
Thank you for sharing,
with us even tho it didn't have an end!*smiles*
Warm love
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Re: a story without an and
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 04:53:43 PM AEST (User
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Very vivd images and great metaphors!!
You tell a wonderful story!!! |
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