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The Dome
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 01:24:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The dome holds where I used to be once
Times when I held the pain in, but did not yet have to see or feel the consequences of my actions
But while the dome still remains
It's time when what I put in has come back to me
Now I see and feel it
I'm reminded of old love, and my friends' goodbyes
Coming home from far off places
What do they think of me now?
Now the dome has changed
I'm no longer welcome
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the_story_of_the_year
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2005-12-08 01:24:22]
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Re: The Dome
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by Sophie_Taylor on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 01:44:52 AM AEST
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Great Write
CONGRATULTIONS!!
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Re: The Dome
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by Kamal on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 11:11:28 AM AEST
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Peace & Love
Please take head to life experiences..
I love you as a creature created by God.
Peace |
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Re: The Dome
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by Kamal on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 11:11:31 AM AEST
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Peace & Love
Please take head to life experiences..
I love you as a creature created by God.
Peace |
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Re: The Dome
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by Kamal on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 11:11:34 AM AEST
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Peace & Love
Please take head to life experiences..
I love you as a creature created by God.
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