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forbidden love
Contributed by
freda_burrel
on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 01:00:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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triangle of three,
united are two.
the love of one,
just will not do.
you can't seem to stop,
talking of her.
when you're with me,
silence prefer.
you're one on one,
this I can see.
but if you noticed ,
you're not with me.
territorial witch,
that I may be.
half of you always,
belong to me.
you say you're mine,
but yet you are there.
look at me,
is this really fair?
yet we can't promise,
what tomorrow may bring.
as for the triangular three?
a momentary thing.
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freda_burrel
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2005-12-08 01:00:24]
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Re: forbidden love
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by Sophie_Taylor on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 01:41:52 AM AEST
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short and meaningfull!!
Congrats!!
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Re: forbidden love
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by brokenwings on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 03:56:24 AM AEST
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if i am seeing this right its a rough spot to be in there.. hopefully yours works out.. the poem was great
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