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Changes
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 10:33:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You don't know what you've done to me
Don't see a difference
You never saw the shy girl
The girl lacking real existance
Because the moment I met you
I came out of my shell
You brought me out
Of my silent hell
The moment you spoke
My heart stopped beating
And for the first time
I didn't feel like retreating
Before you came along
My past kept me scared
But your smile, it proved
That somebody cared
And now I'm not afraid
To reopen my heart
Even though
Nature's torn us apart
So thank you beloved
For making me try
For helping me change
Before you had to die
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
... [
2005-12-07 22:33:03]
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Re: Changes
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by slogan on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:23:58 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem.. very personal but uplifting as well... great write...jh |
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Re: Changes
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by OzChick on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 12:34:04 AM AEST
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First of all, I am so sorry for your loss.
Secondly, this is a beautiful tribute to your love. You have turned a tragedy into inspiration. Stay strong. Blessings, Jenny. |
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Re: Changes
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by brokenwings on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 03:58:39 AM AEST
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great write i am in tears because this was my stroy though my love has been gone for 3 years now the pain is still there.. thank you so much for these words..
tasha |
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Re: Changes
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 05:06:30 PM AEST
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| Nice write, its amazing the effects other people can make in our lives. |
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Re: Changes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 03:59:20 PM AEST
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OMG, Kiela, this is so sad! I'm sorry to hear about your loss but it did inspire a beautiful write from you! What a wonderful dedication.
Thanks for sharing and take care,
Tim
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