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Days.
Contributed by
Consistency
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Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 09:20:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As the sun rises, and touches your soft cheeks
And as the rain falls upon are feilds.
As the wind blows, swaying the trees.
Silently watching the leaves fall.
As the day falls asleep
And the Sun sets kissing the hills.
All my thoughts become clear.
And i realize.. i do
loveyou
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Consistency
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2005-12-07 21:20:21]
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Re: Days.
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 09:30:15 PM AEST
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Welcome,
this is beautifull and I feel u.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Days.
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by Kie-Kie on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 10:35:44 PM AEST
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*hugs* I'm glad to see you're in love it's a wonderful feeling, hold onto it :)
Beautiful poem from your heart :)
Love ya,
~kiela~ |
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Re: Days.
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by STECKS on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 10:47:42 PM AEST
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| Its a Very Nice Poem about Love. I can feel the poem and Keep up the good writing. |
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Re: Days.
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by slogan on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:44:09 PM AEST
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| good poem..jh |
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