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Forever Fondly
Contributed by
Shmokin
on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 07:33:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Forever Fondly
You woke me up
You saw something in me
Hidden under armour
No one else seemed to see
Incomprehensible to me
That for me you lust
After having my life shattered
Lust is an emotion I can trust
It makes no promises
It just feeds a yearn
Filling the need to be desired
Feel beautiful - It's my turn
You reminded me
There's more to being alive
Than each 24 hours
You manage to survive
Forever fondly I think of you
As now i can move on
Feeling I am worthy
Knowing I am strong
My body you adored
With passion and desire
Explosively in carnal knowledge
Relit my internal fire
Our bodies worked in unison
Feeding eachothers need
Absent of inhibitions
Sexually freed
The electricity between us
Just the touch of our lips
Your searing desire
Pressed, to my hips
Alas we must move on now
Although the lust it doesnt wain
Tis time for me to cut the tie
And try to love again
We knew it had no future
Just enjoy the moments we shared
The wrench this parting is causing
For which, neither had prepared
I thankyou my darling
Never gone from my heart
The last page of our chapter
Ready for the new one to start.
XShmokinX
Copyright ©
Shmokin
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2005-12-07 19:33:20]
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Re: Forever Fondly
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by b_rand on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 07:37:13 PM AEST
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this is absolutely amazing ... you express everything so perfectly
You reminded me
There's more to being alive
Than each 24 hours
You manage to survive
this is one of the best lines i've read in a very long time. great jbo |
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Re: Forever Fondly
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by jyssvw22 on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 07:59:31 PM AEST
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wow, this was masterful, from beginning to end, you painted a brilliant story.
great piece of writing here
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Re: Forever Fondly
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 08:48:37 PM AEST
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okie dokey, what a write.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Forever Fondly
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 11:31:21 PM AEST
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Nice poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Forever Fondly
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 05:13:05 AM AEST
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| well done , a joy to read |
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