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Spirit in the Wind
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 04:23:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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She's a spirit in the wind
Ever blowing wild and free
Feel her breath upon your skin
Look, but you will never see
In the Willows hear her voice
Whispers tempting mortal man
Laughing as she runs away
"Catch me, catch me if you can"
I have crossed the savage oceans
Braved the mountain's icy face
Searched the forests and the meadows
Praying for the slightest trace
Lover of a thousand lifetimes
Grant this moment I beseech
Still the air and calmly stay
Once, just once within my reach...
In the Willows hear her voice
Whispers tempting mortal man
Laughing as she runs away
"Catch me, catch me if you can"
Feel her breath upon your skin
Look, but you will never see
She's a spirit in the wind
Ever blowing wild and free
L. Carling c2005
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Rakerman1999
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Re: Spirit in the Wind
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 04:31:44 PM AEST
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Wonderful write, Larry
(Sent you a PM...)
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Re: Spirit in the Wind
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 04:35:48 PM AEST
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Now you feel her presence a haunting in your soul a need a longing to reach out and grasp her> Heart pulsating hand grabbing her hair kisses so intense phew where did that come from it just seems to be flowing from my finger tips.
Magnificent as always
Love Angelxx |
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Re: Spirit in the Wind
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by slogan on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 04:40:58 PM AEST
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| Very good... I really enjoy reading your poems...jh |
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Re: Spirit in the Wind
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 05:04:24 PM AEST
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the mystery of the spirit in the wind this is beautiful Larry
Michelle |
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Re: Spirit in the Wind
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 05:30:32 PM AEST
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A wonderful write. I got caught up in it.....the quest for a passionate all consuming tender love where you maintain that initial falling in love phase intensity. Ah, but alas it's not to be.
Very whimsical and romantic
Well done my friend.
Will |
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Re: Spirit in the Wind
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 05:41:38 PM AEST
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Larry this is a phenomenal masterpiece brilliantly penned. You never cease to amaze me. A poetic genuis who always presents us with incredible poetry. Hats off to you my friend.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Spirit in the Wind
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:50:24 PM AEST
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Once again you did an awsome job.
so beautiful. |
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Re: Spirit in the Wind
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 10:00:58 PM AEST
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Wow, Larry.... you may not believe this but - I have this book upstairs that is full of beautiful poetry just like this... it's by this really fabulous poet who...
oh wait... it's YOU. *wink*
*SMILES*
Delighted to have found a very familiar (and still very moving) voice here,
~Snemmy |
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Re: Spirit in the Wind
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 10:34:11 AM AEST
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The temptress who entices your soul. Awesome write Larry. Me loved it
A red rose for you dear sire
In the Willows hear her voice
Whispers tempting mortal man
Laughing as she runs away
"Catch me, catch me if you can"
Feel her breath upon your skin
Look, but you will never see
She's a spirit in the wind
Ever blowing wild and free
Love Angelxx |
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Re: Spirit in the Wind
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 02:20:53 AM AEST
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| well, since I have to make do with old poetry...here I am going through your old writes..this one is beautiful as are they all. I hope you write again soon..but if not, it's like Yeats. I never tire of him. |
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