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hollow regreat
Contributed by
lostrelic
on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 02:27:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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sharpened blades and steel glaives just castles in the sand
imaged from insanity trusting thoughts of man
glorified there vision true technology they deceive
thinking life with out a view of the toys we need
concrete walls our vision falls in this we do protray
living life in hollow thoughts our actions we display
field of trees all living free roots in solid ground
and our species on a killing spree spreading chaos around
bodys filled with toxins high from the air we breath
now think as your condos built uprooting all those trees
sex like cash we spend so fast in fashions that we wear
permissive soul with out a goal wondering with out a care
money green mans true set dream in god we faithfully trust
if this means forget your soul i hope your pedastal rusts
kindness quiet to shy for help shes probaly high on drugs
a woman cold out in the fold hiding her body from the thugs
a child cry her father dies a victum of the night
trying to live in a racist world they didnt have the right
money drugs and hollywood a glimer in your eye
escaping with television oprea is your high
you think your free but all i see is a cage that surrounds
broken thoughts that never forgot in this you seem to drown
hatred mad like shardes of glass bleeding in your heart
pumping true of anger blue you lost right from the start
drivin light of dawns dead light a glimpse of pasts decay
showing lost relics gleam tarnishing away
monkey man and one celled blob thrown with no glimpse of thought
they truly want you to forget and wonder with the lost
why must i see and think these things each and everyday
i really just want to die and slowly fade away
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lostrelic
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2005-12-07 14:27:01]
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Re: hollow regreat
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by DesolantDreamer on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 03:06:18 PM AEST
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| wow. This is very good. I like it alot. Great work! |
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Re: hollow regreat
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 03:25:47 PM AEST
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Reagan I really like your style of writing. Very well penned and alot truth between the lines.
Thanks so much for sharing ur great poetry with us. Enjoyable as always.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: hollow regreat
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by AllSmiles on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 04:02:36 PM AEST
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| That's very well written. I really like it. Nice Work! |
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Re: hollow regreat
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by Shmokin on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 04:48:45 PM AEST
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| Really good read, so many truths, so much anger, well expressed :-) |
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Re: hollow regreat
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by SkC_cutie on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 02:20:06 PM AEST
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OMG i like your poem. Great word choice and imagery. I think that you have a great talent, i look forward to seeing more of your poetry!
--Shaunette |
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Re: hollow regreat
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by jdawg on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 08:01:04 AM AEST
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I'm sorta speechless.. so all i have to say is wow.. i loved it.. truly a great write> thank you for sharing your work.. keep up the great work and look forward for more.. best of wishes to you and god bless.
~Justin L.~ |
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