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Ocean Tides
Contributed by
kamal
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Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 01:04:52 PM in AEST
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To visualize childbirth is like visualizing the oceans of the earth & how it works,
Overnight discoveries generates compassionate memories,
Witnessing childbirth is definitely any mans deniable fantasy,
Considering the experience,
Causing contracting pains making it more tremendous,
As a spectator of… life formulates itself inside causing new hormones & emotions to collide or arrive,
The labor pains is similar to the pressure from “Ocean Tides,”
How her contractions begin small
Then as current flows it becomes huge & tall,
If the timing is right then the pressure would fall,
Or Drop,
Causing any man heart to stop,
It’s a miracle how life gets presented,
Knowing only God has sent it,
Which could either bring laughter or cries,
Cries because there was many that died,
When the labor pains is as fatal as “Ocean Tides,”
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kamal
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2005-12-07 13:04:52]
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Re: Ocean Tides
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 01:45:14 PM AEST
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what a great way to display a miracle like birth i salute your writing style
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Re: Ocean Tides
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 02:43:38 PM AEST
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Wow now who's the brilliant one?
U got this 100% right.
huggs,
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Re: Ocean Tides
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 03:43:59 PM AEST
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WoW this is an outstanding and brilliantly penned poem. Hats off to you.
It’s a miracle how life gets presented,
Knowing only God has sent it,
Which could either bring laughter or cries,
Cries because there was many that died,
When the labor pains is as fatal as “Ocean Tides,”
Summed it up really well. Thanks so much for sharing ur remarkable work with us.
*hugs*
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Re: Ocean Tides
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 07:51:50 AM AEST
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Great poem
Life is a beautful gift and you captured the fralities of being born.
Just one thing--we are made in His Image.
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