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Of Thoughts, Loneliness, Sadness, And Hope
Contributed by
Ada
on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 10:49:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Shadows dance in the lack of light
Playing tricks on my imperfect sight
Rain hardly falls on asphalt road
As I remain cold in this abode
Tears don’t dry in this frigid air
They freeze, leaving me in this nightmare
Clouds cover and uncover stars
I reach to the heavens to touch Mars
Copyright ©
Ada
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2005-12-07 10:49:04] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Of Thoughts, Loneliness, Sadness, And Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 07:35:00 PM AEST (User
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Loved the imagery you used in this poem. This was a very good poem. good job!
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