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R.I.P mike's heart, a kind thing, but ultimately useless
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socialmisfit
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Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 03:49:30 AM in AEST
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heartless
and hopeless
that is me
this is now
i say **** it all
throw it around
drink up that gin and kerosene
light your match and then let me be
burn my heart
to keep me warm
torch my hope
im sorry to be the one to inform
but being careless is how i cope
now you know
im as imperfect as you
strike me up with those matches
you know i deserve the flames
its the only way to dry the tears
i know it seems such a shame
but this is my resignation
i am giving up
im giving in
ill confess
im just another ***** mess
still saying sorry
like it could bring you back around
now to write you off
as you have given up on me
what did you expect?
i was always a lost cause
im still surprised you took that bet....
But damn this hurts
and it was meant to (it was meant to)
now to keep talking would be a waste of breath
and to keep living a waste of death
so ill let the matter drop
as there is nothing left
but to bury my heart
....rest in peace....
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socialmisfit
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2005-12-07 03:49:30]
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Re: R.I.P mike's heart, a kind thing, but ultimately useless
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 04:12:59 AM AEST
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hey now,
this write is full with power!
It's o.k. to bury your heart in writing, my vice to somthing
yeah, I'm crazy but ya gotta be on this planet to survive
the only thing 'bout me that soothes the soul.
luv, huggs,
emy
I strieve daily to b a luntic 'cause they comprenda me well, normle well nevva seen it. |
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Re: R.I.P mike's heart, a kind thing, but ultimately useless
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 08:27:49 AM AEST
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Not bad, it could benefit from a more defined structure though.
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Re: R.I.P mike's heart, a kind thing, but ultimately useless
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by Shmokin on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 08:33:46 AM AEST
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| great peice, good read,, bad title |
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Re: R.I.P mike's heart, a kind thing, but ultimately useless
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 12:47:25 PM AEST
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Self pity from SM? What is the world coming to?? This is an emotive spill, full of dramatic flair, meant to make someone feel bad, whom by the sounds of it, was the one originally hurt...How about a sincere apology to her instead, and an honest try at being a decent, caring guy...? Call me crazy, but that would probably work better than torching yourself : )
Scorp.
(Rolling eyes at life, and names, and such...)
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