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Thing of Everything
Contributed by
packatack
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Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 01:09:47 AM in AEST
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There's a thing that looks like it can carry something in it
But deep inside where eyes cannot ever see it
From a certain view you can see the intentions inside it
When it rises up it fulfils its purpose
Sometimes you feel it when it surrounds a peculiar area
But only if it is full of everything
There's a thing that looks like it can carry something in it
And it can also give out "Love"
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2005-12-07 01:09:47]
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Re: Thing of Everything
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:36:55 AM AEST
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Great write!
full with truth.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Thing of Everything
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by slogan on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 09:17:02 AM AEST
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| well written..good job...jh |
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