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THE LAST PUFF
Contributed by
STECKS
on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 01:01:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Sitting outside with no place to go,
looking deep into my shadow,
trying to figure out what ive been missing,
think what if god was listening.
What will happen to me,
now trying to plea,
trying to make everything thats wrong,
right,
trying to change my ways,
from all those uncountable days,
what was i thinking,
realizing i cant blink,
now seeing that link,
why did i roll them leaves and seeds,
thats the last time i touch any weed.
Copyright ©
STECKS
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2005-12-07 01:01:24]
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Re: THE LAST PUFF
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 02:37:36 AM AEST
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A big warm welcome to YPDC. I hope u enjoy it here. This is a very well penned piece of poetry. An excellent first submission.
why did i roll them leaves and seeds,
thats the last time i touch any weed.
I hope and pray u dont touch the stuff anymore. Well done and I hope to read some more of ur work real soon.
*hugs*
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Re: THE LAST PUFF
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by Shmokin on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 08:39:24 AM AEST
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| until the next time,,, good read :-) |
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Re: THE LAST PUFF
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 07:09:50 AM AEST
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Stecks
Any habit can be hard to break.I hope you succede,
A n ice poem on self strggle.
Sinned |
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Re: THE LAST PUFF
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 06:56:45 AM AEST
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2 each his own.
Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: THE LAST PUFF
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 10:34:09 PM AEST
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| very nice poem welcome to ypdc |
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