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Monotonous Routine
Contributed by
Mangos
on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 08:12:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The monotonous routine
Perpetuates the circular resistance
In the passing of the hours
You shall come to see
How the pollen sometimes,
Comes to kill the bee
And his lover, the naked sunflower
How the carnivore chews and grinds
And obsessively,
Never fully devours
The flesh and bone
The ten minutes lost
In a dimension across
The span of a fifty minute hour
Copyright ©
Mangos
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2005-12-06 20:12:13]
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Re: Monotonous Routine
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 02:38:19 AM AEST
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loved the way you compared lifes mystery with nature. underlying meanings within the poem make one read it several times.
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Re: Monotonous Routine
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:43:17 AM AEST
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LOL Don't tell me you're already pining away for another vacation! It always sounds like you don't like your job. Is it not what you wanted to be, or was your career 'chosen' for you, so to speak?
Scorp.
(Still wishing she could get her hands on her (rather thick) file! lol) |
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