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Majestic in Tartan
Contributed by
Shmokin
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Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 07:40:20 PM in AEST
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Majestic in Tartan
Skirted, they rise gaily
I speak of the men
On elegantly gowned ladies arms
They take to the floor again
With Tartans many
Colours loud
They shout thier heritage
Strong and proud
Cheeks aglow, smiles bright
Every woman feels a lady tonight
With grace and dignity
They spin and prance
Skipping time as they join the dance
One two three skip
Back, one two three
Turn again, turn again
Moving in harmony
The gentlmen resplendent
Take thier ladies hand and bow
Eyes meet, smiles cross
Laughter, at something whispered low
Feet are tapping, hands are clapping
twirling kilts go by
The beat pacing, your heart racing
The spectacle before your eye
Under the arches
Loop the Loop
A bit of a jig
A cheer and a whoop
Flushed faces, and laughter
As we share a wee dram
What a joy it has been
To be a guest of this clan
XShmokinX
Copyright ©
Shmokin
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2005-12-06 19:40:20]
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Re: Majestic in Tartan
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 02:44:59 AM AEST
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you took me to the dance floor. beautiful! makes me want to dance.
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Re: Majestic in Tartan
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by Shmokin on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 06:29:44 AM AEST
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| Thank you for your comment, glad u enjoyed it :-) |
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Re: Majestic in Tartan
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:19:41 AM AEST
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"Every woman feels a lady tonight"
Unfortunate phraseology. A break from the usual emo crap, however.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Majestic in Tartan
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 04:10:30 PM AEST
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An enjoyable and very well penned piece of poetry. I like ur style of writing. I hope to read more of ur work. Keep up the great work.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Majestic in Tartan
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 05:02:12 PM AEST
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Wish I could have been there in person still u spinned me around many times.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Majestic in Tartan
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 05:46:56 AM AEST
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I've read your catalogue, and this is one of your best. I really enjoyed the subject and imagery, and the metre and rhyme were smooth and light.
You obviously enjoyed writing this one.
Good stuff,
Spike |
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Re: Majestic in Tartan
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 10:51:26 PM AEST
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It's like I was there, a great poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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