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In The Ashes
Contributed by
weepingprophet
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Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 07:39:40 PM in AEST
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bones snap
collapse
wrists tired of penance
what is forgiveness?
alive in the ashes
dead in the remorse
the wake of eternity
the settling of scores
you taught me to hurt
now beg for me to heal
ignore the pain
your lies won't yeild
ignorant bastards
i am what you made me
look inside the creation
to the hatred you gave me
tired wrists
bled out from penance
you've changed
repented
why the hell would you want
my forgiveness???
i am what you gave me
the hatred you made me
the sick little girl
sour and angry
these wrists are dead
bones have snapped
i've relapsed
i'll push it away
the meal tray
give it back
i am what i've made me
grew on hatred as a baby
morphed to the sick little girl
sour and angry
forgiveness?
i'll push it away
alive in the ashes
dead in the remorse
the wake of eternity
the settling of scores
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Re: In The Ashes
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 08:19:54 PM AEST
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Amazing write, I tend to enjoy all of your posts though. Very angry, almost needy, calling out for help it seems aswell. I loved it, they always seems to flow and connect. Great write.
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Re: In The Ashes
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 01:06:44 AM AEST
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brilliant, i love the opening lines
[bones snap
collapse
wrists tired of penance
what is forgiveness?]
you should read mine: 'Starving to Survive'
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Re: In The Ashes
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 10:45:53 AM AEST
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Very sad but greatly written as always.
huggs,
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