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The Peaks
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 04:47:21 PM in AEST
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The peaks are getting their chance to be higher than the clouds
Where they deserve to be
Even for just a little while
Maybe one day I'll get my chance
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the_story_of_the_year
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2005-12-06 16:47:21]
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Re: The Peaks
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 05:08:37 PM AEST
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A good image. But I feel it needs more to go with it. It seems a little lonely. Perhaps with time you might use this as a starting point for something larger.
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Re: The Peaks
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 08:11:30 PM AEST
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| its short and its beautiful. I can almost picture the peaks. I love this picturesque poem. |
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