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Camouflage
Contributed by
Willofree
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Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 04:17:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Something hidden others can't find
Is that inner self of mine
Indeed, where does the true self abide
Somewhere between the prose and rhyme I hide
I will give you clues and hints to ponder
But the true meaning may wander
There is that sensitive vulnerable side to this senior
That has a shy and rather guarded demeanor
You may read between the lines
Hidden there you may ultimately find
That essence of self not directly exposed
But perhaps a glimpse of presence may unfold
There may be occasions when I'm an openbook
Where those who know me better, know where to look
If you approach me with sincere intentions
I will respond and risk the questions
Perhaps this poem won't divulge my secret
But there will be exposure, albeit infrequent
With this poem I take some risk
However, I cannot control but only offer this
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2005-12-06 16:17:01]
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Re: Camouflage
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by grin69 on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 04:41:12 PM AEST
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| Damn, this is really, really good. Hope you're having a good day. |
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Re: Camouflage
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 05:41:40 PM AEST
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| Terry, You penned this piece perfectly. Wonderful. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Camouflage
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 08:19:09 PM AEST
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and oh what a struggle it is my friend...
but you always manage to find a way to express your feelings in ways that go right to the readers heart.
Very well done
Barkeep!!
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Re: Camouflage
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 12:08:12 PM AEST
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Ahhh yes...we're all familiar with this, all too well. Some of us veil ourselves more than others, but we're all guilty to a degree. Camouflage or not, you always express your feelings quite well in your writes, and shed some light on the type of person you are...Keep up the writes, I always enjoy reading your work : )
Scorp. |
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