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Snow
Contributed by
bethie
on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 01:39:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Walking in a quiet, black night;
white snowflakes gleam;
I can see soft music in their light,
Is this real?
Or maybe a self-induced dream?
A soundless symphony begins to unfold,
the melody and rhythm are hypnotic;
this silent composition that I behold,
has the effects of some subtle narcotic.
Copyright ©
bethie
... [
2005-12-06 13:39:48]
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Re: Snow
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 02:55:46 PM AEST
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short but lovely a very sweet poem
good write
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Re: Snow
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 04:53:04 PM AEST
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Absolutely loved this. Snow is one of my favorite things in the world, (and of course one of my favorite things to write about, whether literally or figuratively). The only thing I didn't like about this poem was that it was too short!
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Re: Snow
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:32:09 AM AEST
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What a wonderful way to describe depth in something as simple as snow.
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Re: Snow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 03:23:07 AM AEST
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That was very nice. Short, sweet, and beautiful.
Thank you,
Tim
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