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Forsaken
Contributed by
His_Infernal_Majesty
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Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 01:05:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Knocking on Heavens door, please let me in. Rejected.
Falling to Hell, the flames im burning in. Accepted.
The Devil's touch as cold as ice, Still warmer than
no touch from a God whose deaf and blind.
Forsaken by all, So alone and no one cares.
Burning happerly in a place, where no angel dares.
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His_Infernal_Majesty
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2005-12-06 13:05:05]
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Re: Forsaken
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 02:56:50 PM AEST
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| wow i wish that was the case but we all see in the end interesting write |
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Re: Forsaken
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by marie on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 03:59:41 PM AEST
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| wow. |
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Re: Forsaken
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by willow_tara72002 on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 03:50:17 PM AEST
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| its great. i love how dark it is. |
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Re: Forsaken
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 05:02:33 AM AEST
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| well done , very dark |
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