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Me Myselfish and Eyes
Contributed by
grey_matters
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Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 11:31:08 AM in AEST
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I will do her this thing,
For her forever in every way,
I'll hold her head above heaven,
Beat my heart i'll take a break...
Me my selfish and eyes...
Me my selfish and eyes...
Help me, somethings happening,
Hold me, please don't touch me,
Hate me, it makes it easy,
Maybe, this is happy...
Me my selfish and eyes...
Me my selfish and eyes...
I'll be your whatever you want,
I'll be your whatever you want...
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Re: Me Myselfish and Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 12:20:08 PM AEST
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Very good start, but needs more verses. Catchy title. Give us somemore!
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Re: Me Myselfish and Eyes
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 12:50:16 PM AEST
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It is a very intriguing and catchy title ... I think maybe it could stand some further development. I am curious as to how you hear it.
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Re: Me Myselfish and Eyes
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by waos on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 11:46:54 PM AEST
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K...I saw the rating on this and disagree... perhaps relating, perhaps seeing
something in it, I don't know, I just liked it.
The "Me my selfish and eyes" not only sounds cool but can have more
in it than someone might thing at first.
I liked this.
~Kara~~Waos~ |
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