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not promising
Contributed by
igba
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Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 11:22:21 AM in AEST
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i can"t promise you a castle
i offer my warm hut instead
i can"t promise you a fortune
the path to success i"ll point out
i can"t promise to be there always
i"m just human afterall
i can"t promise you eternal happiness
a source of sorrow i"ll not be
i can"t promise you immortality
to mortality we must bow
i can"t promise you eternal happiness
it"s not mine to grant
but i promise you my love
which i cannot suppress any longer
Copyright ©
igba
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2005-12-06 11:22:21]
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Re: not promising
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 08:53:35 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write.
wwwhhhhhoo could ask for more?
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emy |
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Re: not promising
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 03:23:40 PM AEST
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wow i like this piece .. i like the choice of words and everything.. and i love the end of this thanks for sharing.. its a very powerful write
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