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GOING HOME!
Contributed by
Robert_Edgar_Burns
on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I want to sail across the gulf
That separates you and I.
I want to come back home to you,
Oh please dear, let me try!
I want to hold you in my arms.
I want to pat your hips.
I want to reacquaint myself
With your toes up to your lips.
Oh won’t you open arms to love,
To find a world of joy?
So happily could you be my girl,
And let me be your boy?
I want to build a mighty bridge,
To connect our distant shores.
Then I’d meet you in the middle,
If you’d take me home as yours!
robertburns2@mac.com
homepage.mac.com/robertburns2/…
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2003-01-24 04:00:00]
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Re: GOING HOME!
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 05:40:59 AM AEST
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Oh yeah baby boy,
If this cold weather stays around you could walk on water.
Very good and awesomely creative!
Still your #1 fan,
luv u,
emy |
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Re: GOING HOME!
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by kolbrun on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 06:15:46 AM AEST
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A very good write, full of the fire with which you write.
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Re: GOING HOME!
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by emystar on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 01:39:59 AM AEST
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very good poem.
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