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Make Believe
Contributed by
Shnannon
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Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 01:21:17 AM in AEST
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When I was young
I was always the best at make believe
When I was young
My barbies led crazy lives
When I was young
I thought the world was full of possibilities
When I was young
I felt so sweet and innocent
Now that I'm grown
I know I'm not sweet and innocent
Now that I'm grown
The possiblities seem to have vanished
Now that I'm grown
It's me with the crazy life
Now that I'm grown
I'm still the best at make believe.
Copyright ©
Shnannon
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2005-12-06 01:21:17]
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Re: Make Believe
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by OzChick on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 02:32:05 AM AEST
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| If your'e still the best at make believe then you must still be young at heart and that is great. Good write, nice read. ~Jenny~ |
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Re: Make Believe
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 02:41:39 AM AEST
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I agree with Jenny there.
good write |
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Re: Make Believe
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by tiggytom on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 07:52:56 AM AEST
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You're only as young as you feel :)
good stuff
Tom |
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