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Choices
Contributed by
OzChick
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Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 01:18:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You walked into my life,
and then you ran away.
You left me in the dark,
in the middle of the day.
Now, you are silent.
You said so much to me.
Then you built a wall.
What does it all mean?
My ego torn in tatters.
My mind is blown away.
Feeling like the living dead,
I'm lost for words to say.
So confusing are your games,
I do not want to play.
It's my choice to decide.
I have to have my say.
I'm not sure what I want to do.
But I know I don't want this pain.
I don't need to suffer.
Don't need to feel ashamed.
I can change my life.
It is my life to change.
If I don't want you in my life,
would you feel the pain?
But that doesn't matter.
I don't need you to exist.
If I don't want you in my life,
your presence won't be missed.
This is my choice.
This is my decision.
I have my own dream.
I have my own vision.
Copyright ©
OzChick
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Re: Choices
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by Shnannon on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 01:23:34 AM AEST
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Wow this is really really good.
I especially love the part
"You left me in the dark,
in the middle of the day"
It's such a crazy thought...I love it!
Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Choices
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by tiggytom on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 07:55:00 AM AEST
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Great stuff, a poem of self-realisation
keep it up :)
Tom |
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Re: Choices
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 01:39:18 PM AEST
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| Good write. Your sound positive and powerful. I think you will do well with your dreams and visions. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Choices
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by slogan on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:18:35 PM AEST
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| great poem....jh |
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Re: Choices
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by LOSTtrust on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 01:00:38 AM AEST
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| wow!thats a good poem,keep on wrighting!you really made me think about stuff i try to hide,great poem,good luck with your dreams and visions! |
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Re: Choices
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 05:05:47 AM AEST
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| well done, good job. |
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