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Fading Away
Contributed by
EVERxSOxSWEET
on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 11:46:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hollowed words escape my lips
Im sorry i have to say this
Dont you know i never meant for this to happen?
I thought i needed rescued,
but your luminous lights and screaming sirens came too late this time
because im still slowly crumbling
And theres nothing you can do because its time for my decay
Im fading away.
I've fallen between the cracks like this before
and i'll fall time and time again
Its nothing i can stop, nothing i can help
So use me, abuse me,
because im not strong enough to fight anymore.
Copyright ©
EVERxSOxSWEET
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2005-12-05 23:46:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fading Away
(User Rating: 1 ) by Shnannon on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 01:29:45 AM AEST (User
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Wow
This is really...Wow
I don't know how to describe it
Awesome write!
I know the feeling
Keep it up! |
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Re: Fading Away
(User Rating: 1 ) by outlaw_mutiny on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 06:41:40 PM AEST (User
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good write
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Re: Fading Away
(User Rating: 1 ) by trini on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 09:50:44 PM AEST (User
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another great write i must say. i really like your work. i dont say this often, and i believe it to be true. you are a great writer. keep posting
-trini |
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Re: Fading Away
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 05:12:19 AM AEST (User
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well done |
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