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Ascension
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 11:11:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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I drew my eyes
[ closed ]
as it were
and pulled the world
unto me
Moments before
[ unveiled ]
maples stood
in misted grey
invisible
Holding their ground
[ soldiers ]
at attention
in haphazard
array
Freed of their grasp
[ lifted ]
the moon bid
farewell to the
horizon
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
... [
2005-12-05 23:11:44]
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Re: Ascension
(User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 01:26:26 PM AEST
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Naz,
An intrigueing poem. The thought that came to mind was the dawning of a new day. Perhaps a play on mother nature. Again a unique and creative style. Possible focus on control.
I'm rather stumped on this one Nazzy
Will |
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Re: Ascension
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 05:17:54 PM AEST
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| holy manure nazzy this was badazz, your writing has always been intriguing and new. you seem to be able to reach and grasp new thoughts and ideas readily. great write. |
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