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Sadistic Lullaby
Contributed by
Dark_and_Cold
on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 10:12:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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"Hush little baby, but don’t fall asleep
Mommy left a present for the things that creep"
Slowly awaken
Dreams now forsaken
Filled with unshakable dread
Serenity gone
Something is wrong
Senses screaming in my head
Something strange about the dark...
The soft sound of breath
The sweet smell of death
Shadows dancing on the wall
Scratching at the door
Writhing on the floor
As time slows to a crawl
Something is with me in the dark...
Light and dark clash
A silvery flash
A baleful break in the gloom
A shimmering glint
A glimmering hint
The instrument of my doom
Something is gleaming in the dark...
Something is stirring
Fear is recurring
I feel it drawing nearer
Shivers up my spine
My nights are malign
Shadows darken the mirror
Someone is whispering from the dark...
"Hush little baby, don’t you cry
If you make a sound, they’ll eat you alive"
Sickening feeling
Darkness concealing
I’ll just pretend I’m asleep
Behind closed eyes
My fears all arise
Pray the lord my soul to keep
Something is waiting in the dark...
No one would believe
They’re all so naïve
“There’s nothing in your room”
My eyes open wide
I realize they lied
This place will be my tomb
Something is moving in the dark...
All is not alright
Terrors in the night
Too pellucid for a dream
Silence is broken
But I have not spoken
A murmur becomes a scream
Something looming in the dark...
Confined to my bed
Refined form of dread
The darkness swirls all around
No one can save me
My fear has enslaved me
As the shadows all surround
Something laughing in the dark...
"Hush little baby, close your eyes tight
Mommy’s going to let you die tonight"
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Dark_and_Cold
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Re: Sadistic Lullaby
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 10:44:46 PM AEST
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| ooo creepy. rather edgar allen poe-ish. |
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Re: Sadistic Lullaby
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by OzChick on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 12:14:54 AM AEST
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Man, this is scary. I love the way you wrote this, it adds to the creepy feeling, the whole way you have put this together is brilliant.
Jenny |
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Re: Sadistic Lullaby
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 02:32:52 AM AEST
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ooo creepy is right but ya know i love creepy and chilling writes.
this is awsome you deserve 5 stars. |
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Re: Sadistic Lullaby
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by brew on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 09:16:23 AM AEST
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Chilling, and dark.
Yes, i was afraid. of the dark when I was little. I had a nite light till I was 3......Now I cant get enough of silence, and dark at nite. Very interesting Brandin. Like the whole, yet sent chills all over.
Brew~ |
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Re: Sadistic Lullaby
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by marie on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 03:41:56 PM AEST
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| great poem. very creepy but good. |
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Re: Sadistic Lullaby
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 05:35:45 PM AEST
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| Well long time no see, glad to see a new write. Very not so creepy but true isn't it? I remember being a little kid and sticking and arm or leg out from under the covers as if "Yeah it's just an arm or leg I can live without it". The dark plays mind games, you hear sounds and see movement and your fear takes over, you exaggerate every possible door creek or tree rustle lol. Great write, I've certainly missed your poetry, hope to see more soon. |
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Re: Sadistic Lullaby
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 07:44:12 PM AEST
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Wow, this truly is a "sadistic lullaby". You have a great style and this kept me glued to the screen with every word. That in itself is a mark of a truly great write! This poem involves the reader's emotions like reading a great book or seeing a damn good movie. It made me want to come in and save the child from the evil "Mommy".
Very brilliant and a great write indeed!
Thanks,
Tim
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Re: Sadistic Lullaby
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by mazeof_darkness on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 09:47:00 PM AEST
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| Scary, you could not stop reading this if you tried, wow! |
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Re: Sadistic Lullaby
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by LittleMissWonderful on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 09:44:27 AM AEST
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| Wow, you haven't written anything in a long time, hun. It was really good though. It truly was sadistic, which you know I like... |
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Re: Sadistic Lullaby
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 11:57:44 AM AEST
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| You are very talented in your craft. It has been a while since I have read your poetry so i thought i would see what you have been writing. Let me know when you publish i will buy a copy of your book if it has this poem in it. I am a big fan of horror. |
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Re: Sadistic Lullaby
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 05:02:27 AM AEST
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| very creepy, well done |
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