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Hidden Feelings
Contributed by
Lonely_Demon
on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 07:42:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You asked me why,
I did not sing,
but I said nothing.
Deep inside
I had a feeling,
to break down and cry.
You asked me why
I did not laugh,
again I said nothing,
but my head was full of answers so cruel
that made me lie.
You asked me why
I wasn't happy.
This time I couldn't stop.
I tried to tell you all the
secrets of my life,
of my dark past.
When you asked me
why I cry,
I was surprised.
I thought by now
you knew...
I thought you
understood my pain...
Copyright ©
Lonely_Demon
... [
2005-12-05 19:42:33]
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Re: Hidden Feelings
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 07:54:00 PM AEST
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this was really good. i like the way it was written. the story was excellent as were the words you chose.
nice |
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Re: Hidden Feelings
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 07:55:29 PM AEST
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How is it that the one who is closest to us, is many times the most distant too? I could feel the agony in this my friend and hope you find your peace of spirit.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Hidden Feelings
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by Shnannon on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 01:39:25 AM AEST
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I don't know how to describe the feeling I got when I read this. It's awesome. I totally get the feeling.
Keep up the good work |
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