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Sweetmeat
Contributed by
Kamal
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Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 02:27:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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You are the truth & the relief of all stress,
Or a diamond that’s laid to rest
Secured in a spot no man could find no matter how long the conquest,
However I’m not just a man
I use my spirit,
So I could find anything as long as I put my mind to it,
I’m like a dog excited over a bone,
Baby please come home
I’m in need of your presence mostly when I’m lying alone,
You’re like a true Queen waiting to be throne,
We’re special because of what we see in each other.
Where many people are not patient enough to discover,
That’s why they break away to look for another,
Hopefully what I’ve written can entice your kitten
To be able to start the beginning
Of a love that was written & no longer forbidden,
Just answer this question,
When its cold & you’re the hand
Can I be your mitten?
Copyright ©
Kamal
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2005-12-05 14:27:45]
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Re: Sweetmeat
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by Manda2 on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 02:57:22 PM AEST
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| Great write. Does she want you as a mitten? |
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Re: Sweetmeat
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 03:57:32 PM AEST
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We’re special because of what we see in each other.
Where many people are not patient enough to discover,
That’s why they break away to look for another,
I see your moral goodness in this write. Unconditional love at its best. And yes, you can also do anything you want to if you stick to it long enough, I hear your plea.. Raquel Leah :D
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Re: Sweetmeat
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 05:16:06 PM AEST
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| Mitten? |
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Re: Sweetmeat
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:32:50 AM AEST
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wow!
if ya talkin to me then so be it.
This is an awesome write!
huggs, smiles,
emy
great write! |
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