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Contributed by
OzChick
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Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 07:58:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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They say if something doesn't kill you,
it's bound to make you stronger.
My life has been so black and blue,
can't take it any longer.
But I'm still here, I'm still around,
I guess I must be tough.
Maybe it's time to stand my ground.
I'm gonna call Fate's bluff!
I will not cower anymore,
and play the victims part.
Whatever life throws though my door,
will only fuel my spark.
So throw towards me all you've got,
I dare you, bring it on!
You know I've already survived the lot.
And I know you're just a big con!
Belief gives you power, without it you're dead.
Pal, I've got some news for you,
your Golden Calf has been covered in lead,
and your lies are no longer true.
Instead of hiding in the dark,
afraid to take a chance,
I will rekindle my fading spark,
and you'll bask in MY luminescence.
I'll stand my ground, with my head held high.
No longer afraid of love.
No limits now, I've reached the sky.
Soaring the heights above!
Copyright ©
OzChick
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2005-12-05 07:58:37]
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Re: FREE
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 08:39:13 AM AEST
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Certainly comes across as a new found sense of self.
One line that particularly caught my attention was
"No longer afraid of love".
Never be afraid to love, it may hurt or disappoint sometimes, but it is also one of the most amazing things in the world.
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by tiggytom on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 10:36:19 AM AEST
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I liked this, acknowledgment of oneselfs worth. good stuff nice flow
Thnx
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by justme03 on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 12:57:24 PM AEST
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DUUUUDE! this is totally frikkin sweet! i love it! :D
lots o love, Kortnie |
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by cashncoe on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 08:50:06 PM AEST
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NICE FLOW DUDE GOOD WRITE AWSOME
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Re: FREE
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 11:03:42 PM AEST
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Nice write, I've been called defiant more than a few times myself :P
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Re: FREE
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 01:44:24 PM AEST
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| Defiant that's a good thing. Some days I feel like I can kick the world's arse. Somedays I feel the world is kicking mine. I figure I just keep keepin' on....that's the key. This is the second piece of yours I've read and l like your style. Peace, Laura |
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Re: FREE
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by slogan on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:20:51 PM AEST
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| i Really like this one...great write...jh |
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