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Home Sweet Home
Contributed by
andyp89057
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Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 06:29:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The warmth in my soul,
Burnt to a crisp
Screaming of the masses
Reduced to nothing but ashes,
By fire blazing forever
I have definitely arrived,
To the place of dreams
Finally my Utopia
The wonderful gates of hell
I now am home!
The Best Part Of Life Is Death
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2005-12-05 06:29:51]
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Re: Home Sweet Home
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by OzChick on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 08:04:18 AM AEST
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| This is very dark indeed. My Utopia is not quite so hot, but I can appreciate this poem. Well done. |
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Re: Home Sweet Home
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by tiggytom on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 10:38:27 AM AEST
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Short n not so sweet :) I liked this
Could it not also be that the best part of death is life??
Thnx
Tom |
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Re: Home Sweet Home
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by honeychild8915 on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 12:53:04 PM AEST
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| Hell is the one true Utopia. I like this poem. Very nice writing. :) |
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