|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Death
Contributed by
sride686
on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 04:42:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
Death
The closing of eyes with in your demise
Forever silences in which we must lie
The loss of breath
To forever sleep
To give up your life
And reach defeat
Dark shades that fade to black
The loss of life
As your souls intact
The end of the fight
That was fought so true
Memories left that are dreams of you
A life remembered will forever last
Live for the future and forget the past
Remember a life and it will live within
Forget its death for it was dealt by sin
Dark shadows that cloud my soul
Storms of death that make me cold
Why not me who made the choice
To take his life and kill his voice
A family forgotten and left alone
Left to suffer as their hearts turn cold
So much pain that plagues our souls
Hate in our hearts as they’re left unwhole
Forever prayers I will always pray
For those that fall and die each day
My heart goes out for families in pain
Remember their lives and remember their names
They died for a country that will forever be free
For they lived to give freedom to you and me
~Steve~
Copyright ©
sride686
... [
2005-12-05 04:42:32]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Death
(User Rating: 1 )
by sandypoet on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 05:31:28 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| A very touching write my friend. my brother johnny is over there. a marine. i love and miss him and worry about him.. read my poem you got into my koolaid maybe you can tell me what to do.. my prayers are with you. |
|
|
Re: Death
(User Rating: 1 )
by tiggytom on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 10:45:13 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Touching sentiment behind this poem
But can we really say we are free and the fight is for freedom of a country?????
Tnx |
|
|
Re: Death
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 02:07:03 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You did great on this one my friend.
Have a save trip home.
hugs |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
