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In And Out
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 08:23:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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[Some]
Inner aspect of insanity
Cries out from somewhere inside me
Outside influence abounds
Around the outer edges, found
Into darkness, out of light
Influx of external night
Outages of infra-red
Distorting visions in my head
Interesting outward views
Outshining colored solar hues
Insight changes outward glance
Outstanding interactive dance
The yin of in and yang of out
Combine within and dance to doubt
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Nazmythian
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2005-12-04 20:23:20]
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Re: In And Out
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 07:22:47 AM AEST
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You play with words
As wizards do
You make me "think"
And doubt what's true
Amazed am I
With every line
And make me wish
That they were mine
Profound and intriguing write, Scotty. Thought provoking seems
an understatement at this point. Your diversity is exceeded only
by your talent, my friend.
~Breeze
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Re: In And Out
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 03:09:37 PM AEST
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Naz,
Ideas come into our head seemingly disconnected until we write them down; and then a cohesive thought formulates in our mind. The thought may drift in and out, until light is shed and finally an insight is gained. This insight may, or may not change our perception.
This is how it impacted me
Good job Nazzy/Scott
Will/Terry
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Re: In And Out
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 04:23:49 PM AEST
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Ahh, well done, this! I like the brevity, and the clout of the words you've chosen. My favorite kind of poetry, really. Spartan over flowery every time.
Keep it up, Nor'westerner. *grins*
Andrew |
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